{"id":13794,"date":"2025-09-08T08:00:00","date_gmt":"2025-09-08T15:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/?p=13794"},"modified":"2025-09-07T19:55:36","modified_gmt":"2025-09-08T02:55:36","slug":"so-now-i-have-to-learn-how-to-write","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/?p=13794","title":{"rendered":"So Now I Have to Learn How to Write!"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>by Bob Sparrow<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"alignright size-full is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"60\" height=\"91\" src=\"https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/09\/image.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-13795\" style=\"width:154px;height:auto\"\/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"alignleft size-full is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"60\" height=\"92\" src=\"https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/09\/image-1.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-13796\" style=\"width:158px;height:auto\"\/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<p>As is obvious from the last 14 years of this blog, Suzanne and I love to write. But just recently we decided we wanted to write something besides the blog. Those who follow us know that Suzanne has already written something besides this blog. As in two very good, non-fiction books,<strong> <em>In the Enemy\u2019s Camp<\/em><\/strong><em>,<\/em> (2004) &nbsp;a riveting account of American civilians, her husband\u2019s family, held prisoner by the Japanese in the Philippines, and <em><strong>Before All Is Said and Done<\/strong><\/em>, (2022) a book that everyone should read to prepare you for life after your spouse has passed. Both books are available on <strong>Amazon Books<\/strong>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But I had a story rattling around in my head, with which I wanted to do something. I actually have several stories rattling around in there and I thought it was time to . . . I was going to say empty my brain, but it\u2019s pretty much empty already. So, I asked Suzanne if she was interested in co-authoring a novel, novelette, short story, screen play, television series, something! I really didn\u2019t know how the rattles in my head would shake out. Fortunately, she was on board with whatever we decided.<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"alignleft size-full is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"183\" height=\"275\" src=\"https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/09\/image-2.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-13797\" style=\"width:213px;height:auto\"\/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<p>So, our story takes place in the <strong>South Pacific<\/strong> and I believe the germ of the idea came from an old television series called <em><strong>Adventures in Paradise<\/strong><\/em>, which was created by<strong> James Mitchner<\/strong>, yes <em>that<\/em> James Mitchner. It starred<strong> Gardner McKay<\/strong>, who was, by most accounts, a nice-looking, bad actor. It was on television for three years \u2013 1959 -1962 (I know, some of you weren\u2019t even born yet!). I went on<strong> YouTube <\/strong>and watched three or four episodes \u2013 it was in black and white, had weak story lines and was poorly acted; generally, it was awful! But it took place in the exotic <strong>South Pacific<\/strong>, and I saw potential for perhaps writing a television series that would be in living color, have interesting story lines and be well-acted. After several discussions with Suzanne, it was decided that I would write down the basic story and she would not just edit it, in terms of choosing the right words and punctuation, but helped create the \u2018arc\u2019 of the characters and story, as well as re-write parts of it to make it more interesting and believable. We each had our responsibilities; she is an excellent writer, who had experience in the book-publishing process and I . . . well, I just had a story and a desire to write it. But I found out, I didn\u2019t really know how to write a story! So I searched Amazon for books on how to write and found two great ones, both by <strong>Sol Stein, <em>Stein on Writing <\/em><\/strong>and <em><strong>How to Grow a Novel<\/strong>. <\/em>When I was done with them, I had scribbled notes on almost every page, yellow highlighted sentences throughout, and dog-eared pages from front to back.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>As Suzanne and I were writing this story, we thought it fit nicely as a six-episode television<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"alignright size-full is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1024\" height=\"474\" src=\"https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/09\/image-3.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-13798\" style=\"width:429px;height:auto\" srcset=\"https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/09\/image-3.png 1024w, https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/09\/image-3-300x139.png 300w, https:\/\/fromabirdseyeview.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/09\/image-3-768x356.png 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">Working title: <em>In Search of Bali Ha&#8217;i<\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<p>adventure\/travel series. So I asked my son-in-law,<strong> Jason Shomer<\/strong>, for some advice as he\u2019s a good writer in his own rite and has had experience in this field. He bought and sent me a book called <em><strong>The Anatomy of Story<\/strong><\/em>, by <strong>John Truby<\/strong>, which is now also scribbled on, highlighted and dogeared. Jason also gave me some advice about writing a television series.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So, Suzanne and I re-wrote what we had into what we thought was a television series, dialogue format. After reading it we decided that we really were over our heads in trying this, and that we should get back to being over our heads in trying to write a novel. The working title for this project is <em><strong>In Search of Bali Ha&#8217;i<\/strong><\/em> and we&#8217;ll keep you updated on any progress with this adventure, but don&#8217;t hold your breath, I&#8217;m still learning how to write!&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>by Bob Sparrow As is obvious from the last 14 years of this blog, Suzanne and I love to write. But just recently we decided we wanted to write something besides the blog. 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